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[SHOWOFF] [WIP] Oasis Town (couldn't think of a better name)

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madguy:
Hello there, i've been working lately (nearly for a day), on this project, i thought i'd share it with you to get some constructive feedback and criticism to help me improve, this is my very first build ever, so please don't be harsh ^^

So i was fooling around and found this cool little place in the mountains, because it was already "sheltered" by the mountains for most of it, i decided to use this as a starting place since i litteraly am the WORST with mountains and such.

I then added some water after struggling for ages to make it right (yeah i'm bad), and then just let my imagination go.

It is also far from being finish, although i kinda nearly finished about 1/3 of it, i decided to wait for some feedback before continuing, just to know what's good and what's not.

phucko1:
Not bad, atleast you know how basic texture layers work. Dirt > Road > Grass > Lighter Grass :P
Some ground effects and it'd look pretty good and if you shape it up at the water edges.

(Btw: This is not an oasis, as it is a river? :P)

madguy:
The water goes nowhere, so i like to think it's an oasis, i can just rename it River Town though, for even more originality x)


Thanks for the feedback, i am really terrible at shaping so i'm scared about doing this, but yeah i'll have to eventually, cause it really looks sharp and not natural.

For ground effects, i tried to do some, but litteraly failed soooooooo hard at following the tutorial, like it really was a disaster

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